Before & after listing samples
Samples
Three platforms, three rewrites.
Each sample shows the original, the rewrite, and what specifically changed. The pattern is the same across all three: more keywords in the right positions, more specifics in the description, and complete attribute fields.
Shopee PH · Beauty / Skincare
Before
Title
Vitamin C Serum for Face
Description
Best vitamin C serum. Makes skin bright and glowing. Good for all skin types.
After
Title
Vitamin C Serum 20% Ascorbic Acid Brightening Anti-Dark Spot Whitening Face Serum 30ml
Description
Visibly fades dark spots, acne marks, and uneven skin tone in 4 weeks — without irritation. 20% stable Vitamin C (ascorbic acid) formula absorbs quickly and doesn't pill under sunscreen. Works on all skin types including sensitive. 30ml / 100+ applications.
What changed: Title keyword coverage increased from 3 to 15 terms. Description added specific ingredient percentage, timeline claim, and skin type callout — the three questions buyers check first.
Spec sample written for portfolio purposes.
Lazada PH · Electronics / PC Accessories
Before
Title
USB Hub 4 Port
Description
USB hub with 4 ports. Plug and play. Works with laptop and PC.
After
Title
USB 3.0 Hub 4-Port High Speed 5Gbps Data Transfer Splitter Extender for Laptop PC MacBook USB-A USB Hub
Description
Transfer files at up to 5Gbps — 10× faster than USB 2.0. Plug and play, no drivers needed. Works with Windows, macOS, Linux. Backward compatible with USB 2.0 and 1.1 devices. 30cm braided cable. Compact for desk or travel. Compatible: MacBook Air/Pro, Dell, HP, Lenovo, Asus, any USB-A laptop or PC.
What changed: LazScore completeness went from incomplete to 100%. Added USB version, transfer speed, OS compatibility, and cable specs — the terms buyers filter by on Lazada.
Spec sample written for portfolio purposes.
TikTok Shop PH · Fashion / Dresses
Before
Title
Korean Dress Casual
Description
Trendy korean style dress. Casual wear. Available in different colors.
After
Title
Korean Style Midi Dress Linen Blend Puff Sleeve Casual Office Dress for Women Korean Outfit 2026
Description
The midi dress that goes from Zoom calls to coffee dates without changing your look. Linen blend fabric — breathable even in Manila heat. Puff sleeves add structure without effort. Hidden side zip closure. Machine washable. Available in sage green, dusty rose, cream, and black. Sizes S to XL — see size chart in photos.
What changed: Added fabric composition, length, sleeve style, and closure type — the four attributes TikTok Shop's algorithm uses to surface the listing in search and recommendations.
Spec sample written for portfolio purposes.
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